Penned in Rage: Book Review
Foday Mannah is Scottish Sierra Leonean. He's an English Language teacher, dad and prominent writer.
Foday has been writing stories for years and has been short or long listed in prestigious competitions, such as the Bristol Short Story Prize, the Bridport, Commonwealth and Bloody Scotland writing competitions. This story was actually the winner of the 2022 Mo Siewcharran Prize.
The Search for Othella Savage, 2025, was published in England by QUERCUS.
Disclaimer:
All quoted material is copyrighted and used with the author's full permission.
The aim of this detailed, pictorial review is to promote enthusiasm for such an enjoyable book and foster a love for reading in general, in the author's home country. Over the years, I've found this approach to be beneficial for readers in sub-Saharan Africa as a whole.

The Search for Othella Savage
Comparison to Other Contemporaneous Literature from Sub-Saharan Africa
The Search for Othella Savage (2025) touches on themes that are common in contemporary Literature from the sub-region.
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Over- Sexualisation and Objectification of Black African Women
‘This is Scotland, my sisters. There are not a lot of Black women here. And so many men see us as a fantasy. This is the pastor’s big scheme,’ claims Jattu.
Source- P. 74: The Search for Othella Savage, (2025) COPYRIGHTED: Foday Mannah, Published by Quercus.
Oversexualisation of the Black female doesn’t have its origins in Literature from sub-Saharan Africa but in American Literature. Attractive Black women were kept as slaves by wealthy white owners because of these women’s curvy bodies.
The predominant theme in Foday Mannah’s debut novel is the offer of the Black female as a sex toy to rich white donors by Pastor Ranka and his wife Amanda from the Lion Mountain Church. Vis-à-vis this fetish centred around the Black woman’s form is the misogynistic belief held by Pastor Ranka and Santa (Gibril Massie) that women and girls are sexually immoral. Nonetheless, it is acceptable for men to find pleasure in an African woman’s body. It must be stressed that the author also presents normal mixed couples like Jattu and older, wealthier, Scotsman Callum who are blissfully happy together. Anaka Hart also dates Nursing course drop-out, Khalil.
In Dream Count (2025) by Chimamanda Ngozi, protagonist Omelogor writes about Nigerian men’s fixation with intercourse in her For Men Only blog, while eleven-year-old Chimuka is taken advantage of by Bo Humprey (her aunt Bo Sitali’s husband) in Mubanga Kalimamukwento’s 2019, The Mourning Bird. In fact, whereas Pastor Ranka blames women attending nightclubs and spreading diseases in Sierra Leone, it was Tata, Chimuka’s dad who infected his wife with a HIV.
Again, sex crimes against African women by rich, powerful men is not a new phenomenon in Literature from the sub-region. While thankfully, this level of misogyny though making a comeback in the United States is rare in the United Kingdom, Foday Mannah is right to explore its deep-rooted nature in patriarchal West African societies.
Chimamanda Ngozi (2025) in Dream Count, in which she concerns herself with how visceral women’s bodies are, while delving into Sexual Relationships, explores male chauvinism, amongst Igbo males from Nigeria but more importantly, she recounts the back story of Kadiatou, now in her forties who had been raped by her restaurant manager: Francois in Guinea and was again sexually assaulted while working as a chambermaid in a hotel in New York by a French politician. Her rape made Kadiatou the subject of racist comments and accusations of being a prostitute.
Hatred of women is what led to the abduction and death of two female church ambassadors (please see below for a timeline and crimes committed by the Car Boot Killer). I must add on a humorous note, Sierra Leone can now boast of its very own serial killer protagonist, from The Search for Othella Savage.
2. Religious Fanaticism Versus Religious Hypocrisy
Santa - AKA Gibril Massie - in The Search for Othella Savage blames the women who were church ambassadors for bringing, ‘satanic behaviour into a holy space…the good church became a place of shame and sacrilege.’ Similarly so, Pastor Ranka in two sermons he preached demonised women, accusing them of debauchery and spreading diseases.
Should these women who were essentially escorts be blamed for having sex with male donors
when the Humanitarian side of Lion Mountain church included pimping out Black girls to rich White men?
I was stunned by Foday Mannah’s portrayal of religious fanaticism in his book. It reminded me of Chimamanda's earlier work. In Purple Hibiscus (Adichie, 2004), Papa Eugine, main protagonist: Kambili and Jaja’s dad, is a devout Catholic in public but a monster, wife-beater, physically violent and verbally abusive dad at home. Likewise, we soon see in Foday Mannah’s novel that Pastor Ranka is a hypocrite.
On the other hand, religious tolerance in Sierra Loen in epitomised by the union of Auntie Theresa is a fanatical Christian married to Hawa’s Muslim dad. Khalil is Muslim but works for seemingly kind-hearted Pastor Ranka.
3. Migration to the West
Hawa, Othella, Stella, Khalil, Kumba and Aisha all migrated to the United Kingdom from sub-Saharan African either for economic reasons and/or to further their education. While Hawa and Othella might have graduated with enviable qualifications, most migrants appear to be like Aisha who end up frustrated and have to settle for low paid low skilled work with Lesley Links. The placement of the African migrant in the big global economies is the subject of many ferocious debates. Even where they’ve obtained a British passport, unlike Khalil, according to London Auntie, are they still compelled to the bottom of the ladder? Are they often the source of cheap labour as evidenced in Americanah (2013)? Ifemelu has her hair braided by French-speaking African migrants and she tells us how newly arrived migrants from sub-Saharan Africa are positioned at the bottom of hierarchy in American society. In fact, a famous line from Americanah is that London is a leveller, meaning high and low-skilled African migrants all contend for low-paid jobs until their immigration status changes.
Obinze the other protagonist in Americanah (2013), is like Foday Mannah’s Hawa Barrie, Othella Savage, Aisha and Khalil who left their home countries to try their luck in Britain. Obinze outstayed his welcome and was deported back to Lagos from England. Foday Mannah’s Khalil’s papers are not in order. Migrants are afraid to speak to DC McKeown in The Search for Othella Savage because of their immigration status. (I myself was a Metropolitan Police Constable who for eight years was involved in carrying our raids in areas with a high ethnic population and witnessed the fear in migrants’ eyes first hand.)
Besides, one constantly questions whether or not foreign countries offer African migrants what we perceive they do.
In The Devil that Danced on the Water (2002), Aminata lives between Scotland and Sierra Leone. In passing, she relays the covert prejudice encountered back in the sixties and seventies especially from her maternal Scottish granddad, though Aminata is chiefly concerned with her family unit. Both Aminata and Foday offer us an outsider's view into Scotland from the perspective of a Sierra Leone a migrant, albeit at different points of time. Aminata’s Scotland was not as easy to navigate as Foday Mannah’s protagonists’ one – a resourceful Sierra Leonean community has grown which offers a safety net for Hawa Barrie, from hairdressers to good cooks, to church members – Sierra Leone has exported its beautiful culture to Scotland.
4. Deceptive Human Nature and Corruption
'Everyone has three lives: a public life, a private life and a secret life.' Anaka Hurt quoting Marquez.
SOURCE - P. 48, The Search for Othella Savage (2025), COPYRIGHTED, Foday Mannah.
This quotation sums up the deceptive nature of some of the characters in The Search for Othella Savage. I gasped when Hawa found out Othella, her bast friend and flatmate attended Pastor Ranka’s house parties. Worse still, she had attacked a bloke for touching her up the wrong way. Who’s the real Othella Savage? Her mother, Dr Zaydah Savage had let her daughter Othella hide in their house in Freetown all the while Dr Savage was pretending to cooperate with Hawa who was searching for Othella.
Who’s the real Pastor Ranka? Is he a kind benevolent Christian or a corrupt misogynistic greedy businessman?
Do Khalil and Kumba Matturi represent the enablers and beneficiaries of corrupt practices of the Lion Mountain Church both in Sierra Leone and on the world stage? Should the argument be that the end justifies the means even if the methods used in the acquisition of donor funds that are invested in orphanages and goodwill projects in Sierra Leone are demeaning to women?
Even if Cecil Ranka is embezzling funds, doesn’t he contribute to his brother’s ventures which at least ensured newly arrived students and migrants from Sierra Leone lived in nice, affordable accommodation?
If no one battered an eyelid when Tina Kanu’s reportage uncovered corruption is it because there is a level of tolerance for such behaviours? In fact, the incarceration of Tina Kanu mirrors the treatment of journalists like the tragic Ade Coker as in Purple Hibiscus by the caricatured Babangida regime.
The answers to these questions would explain why political and personal corruption are rife in Sierra Leone today.
Foday Mannah barely lifts the lid on the effects of political corruption in our home country through the character of the Minister of Trade and Industry: Cecil Ranka. For a more comprehensive look, one must read Aminata Forna’s: The Devil that Danced on the Water (2002). Her medically qualified dad returned to Sierra Leone in the early sixties but was caught up in the violent postcolonial struggles of the APC/All Peoples Congress and SLPP/Sierra Leone Peoples Party. An inherent factor which led to her dad’s disappearance was the corruption among politicians jostling to take over power.
Political corruption is also a prevalent theme in most of Chimamanda's books - in Half of a Yellow Sun (2017) the conflict between Igbo and Hausa government officials, military officers and traders in postcolonial Nigeria led to the Biafran war. We read about the same economic conditions in Sierra Leone - brought on by poor governance - which Hawa describes to people in Scotland in The Search for Othella Savage.
So, Literature from sub-Saharan Africa often portrays social realism as a product of bad governance, as demonstrated by Foday Mannah. The migrant is then expected to take on the role of a provider for families back home. Ramat sees her struggling hotel chambermaid sister Hawa as a cash cow that could afford to sponsor Ramat's lavish wedding to Stephen. Relatives in Sierra Leone had a wish list for Hawa too.
Novelist Foday Mannah’ ends his tale on a positive note. The Anti-Corruption Committee apprehends corrupt politician Cecil Ranka. We can only hope in this case life imitates art.
References:
Adichie, C. N. Half of a Yellow Sun (2006), 4th Estate.
Adichie, C. N. Americanah (2013) 4th Estate.
Adichie, C. N. Purple Hibiscus (2004) 4th Estate
Adichie, C. N. Dream Count (2025) 4th Estate
Forna, A. The Devil that Danced on the Water (2002) HarperCollins
Kalimamukwento, M. The Mourning Bird (2019) Jacana Media
Mannah, F. The search for Othella Savage (2025), Quercus.

Featured Works

The Search for Othella Savage
Analysis of the structure of the Crime Fiction: The Search for Othella Savage -
Exposition
Story opens in Scotland with Hawa Savage scrolling through her phone in bed because she couldn’t sleep.
We are introduced to all the main characters (see character list) the major elements of the story: a lead protagonist, Lion Mountain Church,
Stella Kowa goes missing, dies not long afterwards.
Hawa encounters Anaka in hotel room. We learn about the Queens of Sheba, WhatsApp group. We read about Hawa’s job, studies and family.
Othella disappears.
The author drops a few red herrings- Jam Jerry Holt and the smell of bleach in the rented accommodation.
Rising Action
Pastor Ranka and Scottish wife Amanda ask Anaka and Hawa to become church ambassadors. Carmichael sucks on Hawa’s toes when she goes to see what the donor parties are really like.
Waitress Naomi Wreh goes missing. Found dead in her car boot outsid her rented flat in Forrester park Avenue by Hawa and Anaka.
Detective McKeown steps up her investigation despite Hawa’s contrary beliefs about her not prioritising an investigation into crimes against Black women.
We learn more about the benevolent property tycoon, Pastor Ronald Ranka and his fund raising activities to help our during the Ebola epidemic and the mud slides in Sierra Leone.
Pastor Ranka dies in an inferno after a revival at the Siaka Stevens Stadium in Sierra Leone when a tanker overturns at Old Railway Line. Hawa, Anaka, Ramat, Mustapha involved in incident.
Hawa goes into hospital for the first time in the story.
Hawa’s dream of being locked in a car boot with Anaka and Ramat is a premonition.
Othella is alive and well and hiding in Freetown. We read about Hawa’s falling out with long term friend Othella. Othella took over the reins of the ministry of Loin Mountain Church in Sierra Leone.
We encounter mentally traumatised Moseray a victim of Lion Mountain Church, Sierra Leone.
Auntie Theresa wickedly asks if Hawa who is not in a relationship, is a lesbian.
War victim, Kumba wants to carry on with the humanitarian projects ran by Lion Mountain Church in Scotland. Aisha and Kumba fallout over a refusal to let a man fondle ?? virgin, Aisha.
Climax
Kumba’s vehicle is damaged an attempt is made to break into her flat.
We read about the attack on and abduction of the main protagonist Hawa Barrie at night from her shared flat, by the Car Boot Killer and left in a car boot with air fresheners in a deserted area in Dunfermline. Hawa goes into hospital for the second time in the story.
Falling Action
The killer is apprehended. He was a lone wolf.
Ranka’s overseas assets frozen following a change of government after a link ws established between him and Cecil Ranka. Corruption exposed by Tina Kanu’s Newspaper.
Police close the search for Othella.
Hawa attends her graduation in person.
Resolution
Scotland branch of Lion Mountain Church closed.
Amanda went back to practicing Human Rights Law.
Othella Unopposed wants to run as an independent mayoral candidate for Freetown.
Jerry Holt moved to Rhena Church, and projects another viewpoint, ‘For me, it’s enough to be moral and decent to fellow human beings.’ P. 324.
Hawa takes up hiking with Jerry Holt.
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A Depiction of What Hawa Barrie Might Look Like in Real Life.
Amateur Crime Detective Hawa Barrie’s Character arc:
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Hails from Freetown.
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Has a Dad who works for the Sierra Leonean government as an electrician.
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Has sibling Ramat who got married to a guy from Lion Mountain church: Stephen.
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Mother succumbed to an aggressive form of cancer in her fifties.
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Hawa’s Muslim dad remarried- a devout Christian woman called Aunty Theresa who used to badmouth Hawa and Ramat to their dad while she was in bed with him.
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This would prompt Hawa’s dad to tell then off in fits if anger.
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Hawa’s insomnia started when she began to stay awake to listen to her step mum gossiping about her and her sibling in bed to her new husband.
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Left for Scotland having won a Commonwealth scholarship to study for a PHD in International Conflict and Cooperation at Stirling University and obtained a distinction.
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Had probably graduated from Fourah Bay College not long before?
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Joined the ‘Queens of Shaba’ WhatsApp group and reconnected with other Sierra Leonean women. The group members supported Zainab’s transfer toa private clinic in Hill Station for treatment for Typhoid Fever and pooled money together to arrange Stella Kowa’s funeral in Scotland.
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Met sidekick – other protagonist – African American Anak Hurt while working a shift as a hotel chambermaid in Scotland.
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Anaka went with Hawa to Sierra Leone when the latter returned to her home country after a year of studying abroad.
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Hated mountaineering but went on hike with Jam Jerry Holt in order to find out more about the missing Othella savage and victims, Naomi Wreh and Stella Kowa. Her character grows - at the end of the story she has begun to enjoy long walks with Jerry.
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Started attending Lion Mountain church in Sierra Leone and was indoctrinated by Amanada and Pastor Ranka in Scotland into becoming an ambassador for the evangelical movement.

A Depiction of What DC McKeown Might Look Like in Real Life.
Crimes of Car Boot Killer Associated with the Lion Mountain Church, Scotland:
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Stella Kowa – taken from Granton and discovered left for dead in a car boot in Dalgety Bay; number of cardboard air fresheners found with her. Died while hospitalised at the Royal Infirmary.
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Naomi Wreh – went missing, found dead in a car boot with fifty-seven air fresheners
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Kumba Mattturi’s- House in Clermiston was broken into by ??
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Hawa Barrie abducted from her shared flat and left in a car boot with air fresheners in a deserted area in Dunfermline
Serious Incidents:
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Pastor Ronald Ranka - burnt in an inferno in Freetown
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Othella – Went missing in Scotland
Characters Framed in Storyline:
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Pastor Ranka
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Hawa
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Amanda
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Othella
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Jerry Holt
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Aisha
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Elijah Foot-Patrol

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The author has linked religious and political corruption to demonstrate how power can hold people captive.

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Question:
What Would You Have Done if the Police Were Looking for You After Two Young Women You Introduced to a Pentecostal Church, Were Found, Bound and Left for Dead,
in Car Boots?



Comments and Feedback (on Facebook)
Regarding the mention of the fake American accent by a Lungi Airport Staff, N'fa-Shequ Mailin-Morris Mousa Sillah wrote:
Interesting and annoying! Accents shouldn't be changed just because you want to fit in! We should atleast, try to be embracing our original accents for us to be easily recognised as a particular national or tribe.
Thank you for making this work known. Congratulations to you my fellow Sierra Leonean, Mr Faday Mannah.
Foday Mannah’s The Search for Othella Savage reminded me of a viral story that shook Britain in 2015 - the story of Walter Masocha. But Foday's book piqued my interest because of how the imaginative writer relays even more shocking events. I'm gripped until the very end.

Foday Mannah’s spell-binding crime fiction raises troubling questions about how much evangelical (so-called Born-Again) churches are regulated.
BBC News Story https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-scotland-tayside-central-33154718